Madness in the night.

A far away distraction keeping you awake at night. Time being the only obstacle in the way.

Need sleep, but none is there.

I see only darkness for it's my only companion.
Bring the light forth because without it getting lost will be easy.

The night calls for adventure and yet the only thing you see is more darkness.
How can you have it, if you cannot see it?

The answer is clear. wait until the day, for when it sets.
The adventure can begin.

laughs and more laughs can keep the madness away

Reviews

[Lola Nation]

off to the funny farm

[Wunderlich]

I love the second line of the second stanza. Very good poem, man.
Corrections are in [brackets]:

"I see only darkness for it[']s my only companion.
Bring the light forth because without it getting lost will be easy."

"The night calls for adventure and yet the only thing you see is more darkness.
How can you have it[,] [i]f you cannot see it?"

"It's" is a contraction of the words "it" and "is". "Its" is the possessive form of the pronoun "it".

That should be one sentence. If you want the reader to read that line with a break between the first part and the second part, use a comma between them.

[ALifeAquatic]

Quite and unusual piece, I've got used to reading long pieces I like how brief this is, holds my attention easily and it makes me want to read it again!

"How can you have it. If you cannot see it?"

Love that line!

Really a great introduction to your writing style can't wait to read more of the same!

AHouseOfChambers

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. Roll properly and story is good.
Coyote