Starless Night

Starless Night

A Poem by christie29
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Just a sad poem about death.

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In the dark starless night

I cry with all my might

All I can hear is sobbing

My mum lost her dad tonight

He was like a dad to me

Brave and strong

But what I witness is pale white and distorted

This is not the man I grew to love

Why couldn’t he live just one more night?

I pray to the stars and I beg God

To give him one more glimpse at life

But none of them answer my pleas

I scream I cry but he is gone

and now I’m living this

sad shell of a life

© 2013 christie29


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very great simply done poem with emotions.............
'I pray to the stars and I beg God To give him one more glimpse at lifeBut none of them answer my pleas
I scream I cry but he is gone
and now I’m living this
sad shell of a life.'would be fav line of mine.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

christie29

11 Years Ago

That would have to be my favourite part as well. Thanks for reviewing :) no one has ever really like.. read more



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very great simply done poem with emotions.............
'I pray to the stars and I beg God To give him one more glimpse at lifeBut none of them answer my pleas
I scream I cry but he is gone
and now I’m living this
sad shell of a life.'would be fav line of mine.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

christie29

11 Years Ago

That would have to be my favourite part as well. Thanks for reviewing :) no one has ever really like.. read more

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Added on March 11, 2013
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Tags: sad, poem, loss, emotional

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christie29
christie29

Canberra, ACT, Australia



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I'm currently studying Writing at the moment and so far i love it! i like to write about fiction and about sad life stories. more..

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