Poison Sunlight

What days without her do to me

I go through my days

with deadly poison

coursing through my veins.

 It slowly ticks by

 as my soul hands another sliver of itself

 to the void/

 The light of day gets duller and duller

 til it all fades away.

 My sun is gone

 and all i have left is the rain.

 It feels colder now

 when you're on your own,

 but i guess it's nice for once,

 being a lone soul.

 At least you don't rip at me slowly,

 the way it hurts more.

 I am slowly dying here,

 but it's better this way

 because you're not causing it.

Reviews

[The Midnight Pen]

Thank u Kit! :D I appreciate the review!

[deeps]

I go through my days
with deadly poison
coursing through my veins.

I really enjoyed this write, these words really stuck out.
This is a wonderful write, full of feeling.