I'm Done

I'm Done

A Poem by Cinu~
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Um, yeah..I just got this back after a friend had it for a week, and when I read over it, I could've sworn my friend wrote it...I didn't recognize my own...hate in a poem..

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I'm Finished,

Fed up with all of this,

You've destroyed my final nerve,

and sent it spiraling into an abyss.

 

I've always given you chances,

For when you wrong me,

because you were once special,

Boy, can I now see?

 

You have done nothing but cause pain,

You've hurt me, killed me,

My insides ache with fear,

That you won't stop until I've fallen to my knees.

 

You've shattered my pieces,

Of my soul that lay about,

You expect me to pick them up,

so you can come back to knock me out.

 

You've always pushed me,

Toyed with me for fun,

but now you've gone to far,

So now, I'm Done..

 

But next time you see me,

I won't take your s**t,

I'll shout, Scream, Explode with my anger,

and give you what you deserve!

every Last bit...

© 2009 Cinu~


Author's Note

Cinu~
I'd like to know what you think of my font changes...just something to show the build up in anger I had when writing this..

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I like the font change. It's in all the right places. This is very well written.

You've shattered my pieces,
Of my soul that lay about,
You expect me to pick them up,
so you can come back to knock me out.

My favorite lines. Your a good writer.





Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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