Your gone

Your gone

A Poem by Eleanor

Your gone

Your actully gone

You really did it this time

You actully jumped

Or maybe cut deep enough

Or drank enough

Who knows?

 

I remember

When we were kids

Playing in the streets

Not a care in the world

Never thinking

One of us

Who have to live without the other

But then again

I wouldn't have knwon then

How you were feeling

 

I will never forget you

You will always in my mind

And my heart

I only wish

I got to say a final goodbye

But even if I had

It would never begin to

Express how you made me feel

© 2012 Eleanor


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This is such a sad write, but yet so heart tuggingly beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is beautiful . There is so much emotion evident, and if this is based on experience, my heart is with you. Keep on writing, you have a truly amazing gift.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awe....so sad....It reminds me of losing my ex...thanks for sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Eleanor
Eleanor

New York, NY



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Hi! I'm Eleanor. I'm 18 and I live in New York. I love music and writing and yeah. If you really wanna know more, message me. One Direction, Cher Lloyd, Ed Sheeran, Olly Murs, Conor Maynard, The Wan.. more..

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