~Recollections

Haiku-inspired poem I wrote, both inspired and for my ex. I wrote a shorter version in the Valentine's card I made him, which you can see in the picture..

Blackcurrant kisses
Sweep me off my feet
Take my breath away

Make me gasp for air
Running my hands over your body
You gasp for air [too]

The bond, so strong
You and I move together
We are one now

Push my hair away from my face
Tease my tongue with yours
Touch me where I yearn to be touched

Passion burst;

Spontaneous combustion…
Blackcurrant bliss.

 

Reviews

[Insanemom5]

Love is a beautiful thing

[Juliette Cross]

i like this a lot. it feels very light and romantic. pretty.

[Akaila]

ahh this is really good!! it just falls together perfectly! it was great!
~akaila~

[Karen]

Wonderful. Ah the bliss of young love!
I agree with Nathan, not using punctuation has a positive effect. Great job.

[Nathan Duncan]

Very well written, it flows perfectly. Not using punctuation had a very positive effect on the poem, I enjoy that style of poetry immensely. Well done.