Recorded Delivery

Originally these were lyrics but I think it works better as a free-verse poem :)

I sent something to you today, due tomorrow.

I sent it via recorded delivery:

it should arrive at 6.15pm prompt*

(*please be at home to receive).

I've travelled various distances solo,

But never in this direction;

That's why I hope he'll be glad of my arrival.

 

"Because the item is uncommon and somewhat valuable,

We recommend that you come to Exeter train station

and collect the item yourself - to avoid damage."

 

Oh, recorded delivery...

At least they are delivering.

I hope this is okay.

 

I daren't waste time looking for his house in the depths of Exeter;

besides, how romantic would it be if he met me at the station,

On the platform?

Like a film.

 

"Dear sir,

Your item will be on the 6 o'clock train from London Waterloo, coach 5 on platform 2.

It will be available for collection as soon as the train pulls in.

We hope you will find the item in mint condition.

Thank you for your co-operation."

 

The train's pulling into platform 2 now.

I feel nervous but the excitement kills it:

 

The doors slide open.

I see him, his eyes widen.

His neutral lips break into a smile.

I step off the train, grinning happily.

I drop my bags and embrace him.

"Hi," he breathes, "you're right on time."

Author's Note

*About the expected delivery time: bear in mind it would have been 6.15pm if he had stayed at home: it is officially 6pm because he must come to the station. Sorted!

Reviews

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

This is extremely romantic. i like the way it is organized too. It reminds me of a romantic movie. :)

[R J Askew]

Nice one Ali, brimming with wit, anticipation, and energy. The poem and the emotion travel sweetly.

[Angel's Lady]

I love this! Very original. Great write!

And what a package!
*makes mental note to look up postage to Boston*