Low

How Low can I go..........

Low

 

I cry the tears of the Sodomite

For I am a sinner

Not worthy of the gaze from the

Semi virtuous

 

Runners up to the throne pity me

For I am one with the snail

The roach stares down upon me

 

The only solitude in this moment is

There is no place but up…..

Author's Note

Silver lining are in the cloud...

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. You have a good concept but at times it does come across as a little self-pitying, which I don't think is exactly the mood you want to evoke with this sort of thing. I think the ending could be expanded a bit more and made more triumphant in nature, but that's up to you.

[Judas Hammer]

Thank you for the read and the review. Always nice to hear word from a fellow poet.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write. Well done.

[Judas Hammer]

thank you Brandon for the visit, the kind words and review...