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Perverseness

Perverseness

A Poem by Dramatics
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A poem a written at school

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Life isn't a glamorous road
It's a cold stone wall.
It's gated with barbed wire 
wrapped around
Don't quiver for
beyond that is your 
goal.

Most begin on the spot
unprepared and careless
Your climb the wall to
reach your goal
but the barbed wire
cut your fingers and toes
your fall down
dust yourself up
inside yourself behind
the rising tears

"Try . . .Again."

For beyond that barbed wired
is that stone cold wall
is even more is your goal
For life isn't a glamorous road

© 2012 Dramatics


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Dramatics
ignore grammar problems, what do you think of the dialogue, etc.

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For beyond that barbed wire
is the stone cold wall...
Well penned....

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think that this poem has a great concept to it, almost written to be as a warning. I could just see a sign that says, "Beware, all ye who enter... life's a b***h, enter at your own risk" or something like that. Great job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dramatics

12 Years Ago

Life a S.O.B thanks

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