Cyore and I

Cyore and I

A Poem by Comatose

Warmth. . .
You hate me for being me,
You hate me for what I do.
You hate me for refusing to see,
....I am unable to blame you.
-I will protect you-

Cold. . .
Your silent screams grew and grew
echoed now by my own.
I'm not foolish, unlike you,
Over time, I have grown.
-I will hurt you-

Warmth. . .
To see through all your lies
Is something I have learned
Somehow, the hatred in your eyes
Is warmth. . .but it burns.
-I won't suppress you-

Cold. . .
Each day, my hatred binds.
Each day, I become stronger.
I do not possess a child's mind.
I do not see the world with wonder.
-I will break you-

Warmth. . .
I pity you, you are too blind to see.
We are different, and yet the same, I have found.
You can hate me, you can break me.
You can never hold me down.

Cold. . .
I will never let you forget, nor will I let you tell.
I'll slowly kill you, you do not deserve to live this time
For although we may share the same hell,
We will never share the same mind.

© 2010 Comatose


Author's Note

Comatose
Anyone understand it?

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Ahh, I loved this poem, and I can kinda relate to it. I'm pretty sure I understand it perfectly. It isn't that hard to follow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem, easy to follow, I like how you end each stanza, and I also like the pattern you create with the words warmth, and cold. Great job. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow...amazing!!!! i kinda understand it lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow this is amazing....I understand it greatly. This is just wow...i'm speechless

Posted 14 Years Ago


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