For Music

For Music

A Poem by Comatose

Some child, behind a whisper,

does live for music.

Longs,

To hear shimmering tones,

Melody, high, low, violin " Ashokan Waltz, A sock hop, Mozart...

The sweet playing of one so young,

so as to set your heart overwhelmed with a joy like no other.

To be touched again by the sweet angry eyes of another child’s longing to feel present,

Who begs love because she knows it is the one thing that shall complete her.

To be held with loving grace, the large long fingered hands, 6 feet tall, enwrapped in a gentleness unrivaled by any.

Some child, behind a whisper does live for music.

A child hidden,

Masked through firm hand, strong tiny form who dances with headphones mile upon mile upon mile.

Young man’s face

Enshrouded with wisps of silver, white, brown, black hair

The directional lines of

The Prophet’s ‘seasonless’ world mapped deep, directional cause, effect across his cheeks

Some child, behind the voice of conviction

Facts, diagrams, judgments,

Saved by music.

This child does live for music,

Longing to be sung through aged lips.

© 2010 Comatose


Author's Note

Comatose
I can't count how many times it's seemed as though music is my only escape now...

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Music is my life. A great write! Thanks for sharing:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Pewrhaps it is soothing to everyone at times but people need other people who are kind and gentle..Not cruel and selfish..Sadly that is what the world is slowly becoming..lol and God bless..Kathie

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow, this is amazing, i used to play the piano and i used to hate it but now it calms me down. music has been my escape many times. good job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


A very good poem, describing, well in short, music is life. I picked up that there is a young man with long fingers, height of 6 foot tall. I am assuming you know and love this person and for private purposes, I will not say who.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Fantastic poem, Music is life, i like this poem because i love music, and you did a great job expressing your self about it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


lol i agree with hope. this is amazingness! and that stanza is my favorite also I can't wait for more :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is very good the imagery is great but im a little lost on the meaning lol


Posted 14 Years Ago


beautiful, i love this, i love your work

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow. i love this. my favorite lines?

"Some child, behind a whisper does live for music.

A child hidden,
Masked through firm hand, strong tiny form who dances with headphones mile upon mile upon mile."

ugh! i love it! amazing! keep it up :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Comatose
Comatose

Twin Falls, ID



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