![]() Moth to a FlameA Poem by Comatose![]() A bit different, but oh well.![]()
Confidence, wit
Attitude and style Simply a mask put on For your soul's denial You say you've forgotten All about me? My touch and my smile. You loved me I see. And that's how I owned you Spirit and all Yet now you defy me Standing so tall For you to attack It must be so hard Those so cherished moments In your mind are still barred One day you'll remember All that I've done This is fate you see So don't try to run My dear little puppet, Justify I might Although times I wonder Was my choice right? For you see little pawn, It was not of your voice When you escaped from my world It was from my choice Now we're together You're locked in my gaze And finding your way out Like it's some kind of maze Now off of my tongue I list all your flaws Like how you come running Into my outstretched claws So that mask on your face Is to deceive those you know That it is you and not I That is in control © 2016 Comatose |
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Added on June 5, 2010 Last Updated on February 12, 2016 Author![]() ComatoseTwin Falls, IDAboutI write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..Writing
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