![]() Simple MemoryA Poem by Comatose![]() Nothing significant![]()
For all those times I smiled,
When I felt so out of place. For all the times I ran my fingers, Up and down your face. For every time you turned away, For every night I've cried. For all the times I hurt you, And all those times I lied. Every time you kissed me, Every time I lost my breath, For every time I never thought, About what would happen next. For every time I was lost in the moment, Just holding on to you, For every time you spoke me to me, And swore it was the truth. All the times you held my hand, And listened to me cry, All those times you left me, Confused and wondering why. I just want to thank you, In my own little way. For all the memories I have, The ones I take away. And after everything I've done, And all you've helped me see, This is what I leave you with My simple memory... © 2010 Comatose |
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1 Review Added on June 5, 2010 Last Updated on June 5, 2010 Author![]() ComatoseTwin Falls, IDAboutI write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..Writing
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