![]() Our Dying SkyA Poem by Comatose
The distant horizon showed drops
In the setting sun A sense of uneasiness Yet to come Like the calm before the storm, The battle before the war Like the devils anger Within the earth's core The sky was covered in crimson, A sign of danger foretold Forgiveness wrapped around Something that just couldn't hold The wind hung grief and sadness In the air for all to see, Very few saw But for you and me There was just something different; The way the wind rustled the trees It was all almost unnatural, Just to watch their leaves And the atmosphere, The thick hot air that day Giving us a warning As if it didn't know what to say The way the petals Of the flowers blew Toward the endless sky Now lost in it's red hue It would have made you wish to scream, If not for the sound of cries And the smell of poison Floating through the summer sky The morning of the mourn, Like sweet and bitter blood So drink it in, for in the end All we'll ever have is us This newly paved road, Is it love or is it lust? Are we to blindly follow This fading trust? Or do I go on without you, And leave you to atone? But do I really dare... To face this sky alone? © 2010 Comatose |
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Added on June 5, 2010Last Updated on June 5, 2010 Author![]() ComatoseTwin Falls, IDAboutI write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..Writing
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