Just Some Thoughts

Just Some Thoughts

A Poem by CompellingComposer
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This doesn't make much sense, but then again, neither do I.

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Perfection
That isn’t what I’m seeing
Lost inside of my mind
Cold inside of my being

I told myself I wont miss you
And slowly, you’re gonna be gone
Heck if you were really mine in the first place
Heck was I wrong

So much pain around me
I don’t wanna think about it anymore
I told myself the door was slammed and locked
But my fingers got closed in the door

Why is parting sweet sorrow?
I find it more sour
And if time is so short
Does that make infinity an hour?

I’m loosing my step
Talking in my sleep
Tossing and turning
Throwing back the sheets

My dreams haunt me
My tears burn
My body aches for a touch
But I want loneliness, when will I learn?

Age is but a number
And possibly mine will be small
Because time flies
After all

© 2011 CompellingComposer


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very nice - I really liked these lines - "Why is parting sweet sorrow?
I find it more sour
And if time is so short
Does that make infinity an hour?" - you show some interesting points - philosophical undertones perhaps - the whys and ifs - nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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so this really doesn't make muchh sense! It had me all confused! But I LOVED IT! lov eyou megann! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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My name is Megan and I have been writing poems since 4th grade and stories since 6th. I'm very, very young, as I've noticed from the ages of my fellow writers on this site. Yes, I am only 13, but writ.. more..

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