I am a game

My love is just a game

That you love to play and hate

I was just a game to you

I know this is true

You love to see me suffer

To hear about my pains

All in all

To see my happines is in vain

You problably laugh and giggle

Everytime i cry to sleep

But hey whos to blame?

Im the sucker for those bitchy types

Now i see your heart is on ice

You broke mine not once,but twice

 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. seen this one of yours and had to review it.. what passion and hurt flows through this one.. I could really feel it.. and have known these feelings well as I am sure many have.. your ending:

Now i see your heart is on ice
You broke mine not once,but twice

Wow they broke your heart twice.. that's deep.. love can be such torture.. and joy. Must have been some romance to allow a second chance.. which shows you are a big person.. with a big heart! I hope you find someone worthy of it some day.. this was really sad but shows you have forgiveness and I am sure you will find it! =)

[E-man]

I get a feeling its all my fault.. don't deny it well good write an actual poem with rhyme that didn't lose the emotion trying for the rhyme.. your getting better but don't be too mad 1. I told you I would let you down 2. I told you love hurts in the end 3. there's always an end to it don't try to avoid it 4. and if somebody breaks your heart why go back and re-expose yourself to the same person again? 5. ... never mind ill text you 5 or ask you in person either one works 6. Don't stop believing(LOL I had to do that one) 7. you should listen to "Either way I'll break you heart someday" by Augustana i can kinda see a resemblance but they're different writes of course 8. Don't Stop believing LOL