Barn StoryA Story by Corazon NozarocA short story i wrote for a class (IF ANYONE CAN THINK OF A TITLE IT WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED)Barn Story Drake
gripped the rusty old handle to the barn and pulled with all his might as the
giant door slowly groans open. I see
lily’s scattered around the floor and a million candles all around like stars
reminding me of our first date. The sweet smell
of candles mixed with the smell of lily’s all around. Smiling, dancing, laughing, and talking is
all we do letting the world drift away as we are lost in the barn
together. I remember thinking it is one
of the best days of my life. I slowly
drift back to reality out of the amazing memory. He takes my
hand and slowly leads me to the table full with wonderful smells of spaghetti
and breadsticks. I smile because he cooked my favorite meal. Then I notice a beautiful note next to my
plate that says, “To my beautiful Lilly, the perfect girl to be with on a night as beautiful as this. Love, Drake.” I sigh with
joy as he dishes up the food smells just teasing me to dig in before he is
done. I can’t help but think how amazing
he is and how lucky I am. As we sit and
enjoy the meal a little kitten tumbles into the barn. We laugh as it sniffs at the hay and runs off
to find something to play with and we go back to eating staring into each
other’s eyes. All of a
sudden I see flames licking the walls around us. We look into each other’s eyes realizing the
candles must have toppled over and the panic sets in as we run for the door but
its covered in flames. Desperately we
look around for another exit as the smoke gets thicker and thicker chocking
us. All of a sudden he collapses into a
heap on the ground. I let out a silent
scream and run towards him falling to the ground next to his limp body. I shake him hoping he will wake up when I
find a box. In the box is a beautiful
ring and I know I have to find a way out for him. Suddenly I see the stairs to the hay
loft and I quickly get up and run up them.
There appears to be no way out when I see a sliver of light. I crawl towards it and pry it open and there
it is open air. I think about how I love
drake and I jump. The air rushes through
me as I fall silently to the ground.
Then I hit the ground, hearing my bones shatter. My body screams in agony and I let out a cry
of pain. Memories flash before my eyes of
smiles, laughter, fun, joy, and love as I feel the tears slowly spill out of
the corners of my eyes. Tears of pain and sorrow. I hear dogs howling in the distance looking
for their lost family, I hear the trees groaning all around me and the wind
blows silently through them, and I hear the crackle of the fire in the barn as
it laughs at me knowing it has won this time. I start fading out as I hear screams
in the distance my eyes going black barley hanging on to conciseness as I hear
thuds of footfalls running towards the barn.
The water spraying it fighting for us.
I think about Drake and how much I love him one last time as I fade into
the blackness of the other side.
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Added on April 6, 2012 Last Updated on April 6, 2012 AuthorCorazon NozarocCoralville, IAAboutJust a girl hoping to be an author one of these days i know my writing isn't perfect but neither am i more..Writing
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