Copy and Paste

free world kisses : the line starts here shhhhhhhhh, my head hurts

Over the sun horizon
 some fun arisen'
under the lipstick stars
 know who you are
    a split
over headaches
high stakes, dice chills,
 thrill deals
hedge, over top
edge, over spill
Heart quakin'
Earth shakin'
out in the middle of the lake bakin'
door slammin, flake bacon,
clue news:

dit...,ditditdit...dit

this just in ...I love you's
from Hilly Billy blues.
my eyes and ears are burnin'
the world keeps turnin'
you keep talkin'
I keep on walkin'
in these shoes.

Author's Note

after helping Baby R with "copy and paste" instructions I now realize what belongs here :)

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

somethings changed...
somethings happened to...you
somethings have changed...inside of you

[Corset]

getting stronger Ariel

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

metamorphosis

[Corset]

for better or worse..lol

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

either is fine

[Pax]

copy and paste ~ such intriguing title ~ now i wonder which one will i copy and paste :D
or I'll just keep on talkin, walkin ~ oh well this is a witty piece, a delightful read ~ it twisted my tongue ;)

[Corset]

well i'm so glad Pax :) Thank you

[Pax]

your most welcome my friend ~ :) ~ always a pleasure to dig in your library ~

[asdarkeyesclose]

hmmmm well i won't copy and paste, but you don't realise how badly i want to! i loved all of this rhyme time, fun in the sun poem. i loved the image 'lipstick stars' and from 'burnin, 'turnin,' this is all nicley ad hoc, rhyme that doesn't take itself to seriously and gains a freedom of expression that is delightful. fantastic.

[Corset]

Thank you GOD :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Whimsical and delightful... life goes on and so do we.

[Corset]

"life goes on and so do we"

That is the ONLY thing you can count on.

[Corset]

thank you Cowboy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.

[Baby Ricochet]

"Under the lip stick stars" That's awesome. I liked this one. Fine job corset. Damn fine job.

[Corset]

Thank you Baby :)

[redflutterby]

For some reason I can hear Elvis singing Viva Las Vegas right now...not sure why and no I'm not drunk!! Haha... maybe it was the words blues and in his shoes. Anyway....love this rocking popping poem. ;-)

[Corset]

lol, thanks Red

[quinfinn]

i have to agree with the pickle...i want some of what you're smokin'! this is "great googly moogly f**k me friendly" good!

[Corset]

You don't have too but I'm glad you do :) Thanks Quinn

[Frieda P]

I'll have what you're having!! Ha...awesomesauce read...now my head hurts too, ya happy? Good one! ;-)

[Corset]

lol, insomnia? you got it , coming right up. Thanks Frieda :)