God's Little Talk With Me

God got tired of me,
Putting myself down.
All He could see
Was an ugly frown.

He said, Wake-up girl!
You're making your own life,
Miserable and hard.
Causing your own strife.

Wake-up, Mel, wake-up!
My patience is getting thin.
Sorry, but that's the truth.
Boy, that stung within.

But, I deserved it, as usual.
Finally realized I need
To feel confident, be happier,
Uplifting, and more, indeed!

Mel, He said, I love you still,
For you're My child, you see?
I don't like seeing you this way.
Now go and change for Me.

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Change does come from within. Make a choice take the chance end result will be change

[Country Girl47]

Very true, thanks!

[W R Stowe]

your welcome

[Devanshu Rajput]

Well, make use of the opportunity!

Great write! I enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing the excellent piece.

Devanshu

[Country Girl47]

Glad you enjoyed it and thank for taking the time to read this.

[Jamestown]

Praise Jesus! I love this write, he can and will help if we let him, Isaiah 41:10
Thanks for sharing, b-blessed!

[Country Girl47]

Ty, glad you took the time to read it and enjoyed it.

[wordman]

well you better listen ,he don`t like to come back again

[Country Girl47]

Ty for taking the time to read this.

[wordman]

you are welcome