Ponder

are all the stars suns?

are all the suns stars?
i have just realized
that i don't see very far

most of the worlds people
lose sight of grand design
too caught up and shallow
to make up their own minds

it seems like we're all waiting
for what i do not know
losing faith in faith
we choose to go alone

i'm tired of not trusting
in all that i believe
to let go and enjoy
is to be relieved

and as we wait for something
to give this world a nod
i realize i know nothing
and i am like a god

Author's Note

No capital letters is on purpose.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

YOU TAKE PONDERING HERE IN THE LINES OF THIS READ...I KEPT PONDERING MYSELF AS YOU CONTINUED TO SAY WHAT WAS ON YOUR MIND...BUT THIS CAN BE A RELATE ABLE TO EACH AND EVERYONE OF US THAT READS THE LINES...