Hello Little Niece

Hello Little Niece

A Poem by Crazy Cat Man
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A poem about my upcoming first niece.

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Hello Little Niece
How are you doing
In your mom's belly?
You're mom says you kick too deep
She thinks you are dancing
But your dad thinks you're boxing
We first thought you were a boy
We were all wrong
Thats ok you bring us joy
You will be half white half Spanish
You're gonna grow up
Speaking Spanglish
When you grow up
All the boys wanna date you
But you have two uncles with tattoos
Who will protect you
We all wonder what you will look like
Will you have you're mother's blue eyes
Or will it be brown?
And hypnotize all the guys
Oh Little Niece
You give us peace
Now go back to sleep
You will come in September
Now that's a time to remember


© 2012 Crazy Cat Man


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this is beautiful! I love it! it almost made me cry it was so sweet! it was an amazing poem and it flowed beautifully

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is beautiful, I can see why your brother smiled when this was read out, great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

Are u still at the hotel with that ghetto connection? Have u done anymore writing? While on vacation.. read more
Destinyxi

8 Years Ago

Psh the connection isn't too too bad.... xD
And no, I haven't, I've been wanting to but I keep.. read more
Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

That's fine. Living life matters :) live life then write.
Loved your poem, loved this song and adore how much you love the little one due in September....

Beautiful Beautiful..... beautiful :O)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

i cant wait :) shes coming soon
This was so adorable :) and congrats..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very beautiful, sincere and a great poem about the miracle of life =D
There's only one thing I can say: CONGRATULATIONS !

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was incredibly sweet. I have a little niece and she's gorgeous. She's very smart too, I'm betting she's gonna be trouble. Loved your poem, friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

i just felt her kick in her mom's belly :P she kicked hard!
You won't believe, i'll get a niece soon too! :D
I like your idea for this, your flow and that awesome song.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


R.A. Youngblood

8 Years Ago

Haha, thanks!
Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

I just felt my niece kicked hard in her mom's belly :P haha we all laughed
R.A. Youngblood

8 Years Ago

Yeah, she must be strong then :D
this is a unique idea to write about
..every word speaks of real imagery
=]

Posted 8 Years Ago


Does anyone notice the Iron Maiden onesie I have on the page :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sweetness overload. (=
This is filled with so much love and excitement. (=
I felt the excitement of the speaker in the poem over the imminent surfacing of the baby from her mother's womb. I also saw how tightly-knit the family is.
(=

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Crazy Cat Man

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