Expecting Love?

 

 

How can you be expecting love?

When you spread your legs wide

On the first night

I only came for coffee

But you wanted to sleep with me

 

How can you expect me to love?

When you behave this way

All I wanted was to get laid

And you expect me to stay?

I want to go away

 

How can you expect me to love you?

When you easily let me f**k you

What do you expect me to do?

I am not your boyfriend

I don't care if your pregnant

 

How can you be expecting love?

When you gave me your body

So openly and freely

Now you're crying and pleeing

Because I'm not staying

 

Don't expect me to love you

Don't pretend you didn't know

You are only a ho

Who let me 'hit it' low

Now I gots to go

 

Good luck with the baby

I'm sure it wasn't mine

Probably some other dude

Who fucked you too

Reviews

[Steven Williams]

Very harsh, but oh so very true!!! So many people give IT up so fast and then can not comprehend why the person only looks at them like a piece of a*s, but that's what they served themselves up as. If you want love, love first, f**k last right?! Someone needs to say it and I am glad you did. Great write!

~Stephen

[Stacy A. Foster]

Ouch! But unfortunately it happens doesn't it? You see some of the ladies on TV testing three different guys because they didn't know who was the father. That's what I've also hated about Mamma Mia. I saw the production and afterwards thought, "Wow! This is white trash stereotyping at its best!" Some women continue to go to guys that don't care because of their low self-esteem. I think it takes guts and strength to be comfortable alone with ourselves and not with someone to take care of us.

A nice in-your-face writing from you that is deeper than it may seem.
Stacy

[Lucky Me]

wow serious but so common. Girls tend to have this low self esteem and it triggers this type of behavior. You are right in your thinking. You live for your happiness and so should girls like this. If they lived for themselves they would not be giving it all away like this.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, wow. This is a great poem and like always, you did an amazing job. Nice work!!!

Heather

[Gandré]

This had like many of yours poems - a strong moral. It had to be written in this strong style. Well done. I like how you smash us your observations into the face... and we have to think over your lesson...

[Just Manoosh]

Never a truer word. So many times we hear the cries of a womans perspective, so very fresh to switch sides. Good write honey. Mx

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Definitely an accurate portrayal of both sides. It is unfortunate that so many people behave in this way for men and women. There are many men that do this as well - looking for love in all the wrong places is what I am reminded of in reading this. People tend to think if they give up their bodies they will win the heart of someone although I believe as you have put forth here that in the end there is actually a complete loss of respect for the other. Users. Good points here.
Light,
Siddartha

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

great piece... i too think it is pretty accurate for how a lot of females are... it's sad... that girls think that this is the way to either get a man or to keep a man... which is just wrong...
love the lines "You are only a ho - Who let me 'hit it' low"
nicely done

[John Stussy]

pretty damn accurate for more than just a few girls i knew back in school. great job on writing another dead-on accurate piece about society again.

[ForgetMeTomorrow]

oh wow this was straight to the point! I liked it though, its true. I have some friends who really do not understand that this really is what guys think...and that giving it up on the first night isn't going to get them anywhere...but they still cry when they leave...Maybe I'll have them read this. Thanks!!

[Arienas]

This is really good, it is well worth reading and I hope to see more out of you soon. This is defiantly worth the read. Keep up the good work