Your Beautiful Black Eyes

My first romantic poem and a tribute to women with black or brown eyes. :)

Staring into your black eyes
is like the comfort of night
lying in the bed
laughing at things that were said

We lay under the covers
 Ignoring the world above us
No one to cause us harm
As we sleep in each other's arms

In our lovenest cocoon
 We laugh like crazy bafoons
 Then we continue with the light kisses
Tonight you are my mistress

I love combing your hair
 with the tips of my finger
Then I touch your lips
with the tenderness of my kiss
 
Your Beautiful Black Eyes
Are staring at me with love
Your beautiful voluptuous thighs
Are tantalizing as a dove

My black eyed princess
the ultimate temptress
You're different from the rest
far from the darkness

Reviews

[Kayla]

This is beautiful!! It makes me wish that I had black eyes (mine are hazel). Wonderful write!! I look forward to reading some more of your work in the near future

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this is an awesome piece. Very beautifully written, fantastic job!!!

Heather

[Stephanie]

Beautiful and dark at the same time! It's got a pretty awesome rhyme scheme and I can feel the emotion. Really great job!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Nicely penned. Such a departure from what I am used to seeing from you. Thank you for sharing. This is quite delightful and sumptious.
Light,
Siddartha

[Gheeneil]

I so agree, this is sweet. The rhyme scheme makes it a lot sweeter.

[Tallulah]

I love this so much. Its so sweet and loving and tender. It hold so much love. Great wording.

[LostinKristina]

this was amazing.
I love the tenderness of it.
great work.

[Gandré]

I am glad you wrote such a tender wonderful poem.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Huh... this is different. This was very sensual, yet romantic; it's very realistic, which is definitely something I did not expect. Great work!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

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This write is very different from your previous ones, and i still love it .. filled with romantic words and feelings!
Lovely write!