New Moon

Jacob Black Werewolf
He is in love with Bella
She's out of his league

Why does he want her?
She sucks and always sulking
he can do better



Jacob is jealous
He felt like the rebound guy
after Edward left

He was being used
by Bella who was lonely
Love left in despair

Reviews

[Gandré]

I like your satire poem in form of stream haiku, and here you have alliteration and ambiguity. "She sucks and always sulking
he can do better" ------this was nice and it adds higher quality.... you should enter some of Nancy Shrader s contests. this was amusing and sweet even I don't like vampires as you know but that s the movie content not explicitly your poem. great.

[Taylor H]

cute lol