No, Girl

another song..

No, girl,
You tell me that I'll move on,

But no, girl.

No girl,
You tell me that I'll be strong,
But no, girl.

I can't get your face out of my mind,
Your eyes burn pits into my eyes.
They try to see deep into my soul,
Which is now crushed because you can't be mine.

Oh no

Oh no

No, girl,
You say that I'll live my life,

But no, girl.

No, girl,
You say that I'll be fine,
But no, girl.

I can't get your voice out of my head,
It used to be music to my ears.
Used to calm me down when I was sad,
Now it's lingering there to haunt me instead.

Girl, can't you see
What you've done to me?
Why can't you understand?

No, girl,
You say that I'll find someone else,

But no, girl.

No, girl,
You say that I won't just collapse,
But no, girl.

Hey, hey, hey!

No, girl,
You say I'll find another queen,

But no, girl.

No, girl,
You say you're not good enough for me,
But no, girl.

I can't get these tears from falling down my face,
I miss you every night I spend alone.
What happened to your rosy cheeks?
What happened to your fancy clothes?

I miss your curves and personality,
I miss the songs you used to sing to me.
I even miss just having you as a friend,
But my heart just sank when I saw your new boyfriend.

I hope he treats you with responsibility,
I hope he gives you presents and things.
I hope he wraps you up real tight when you're cold,
I know you liked that a long time ago..

No, girl..

Reviews

[Wolven]

Ahhh... the feels. reminds me of my old school romances (or fantasies in my case, lol. I never had that kinda luck).
As lyrics for the song, i can easily imagine this in some kind of jazzy or bluesy tune. the lyrics seem easy to remember and the subject is easily relatable with the focus on lost loves etc. It might actually be kinda interesting to see what way it could be put into music though. You should try it out if you play an instrument of sorts or trust someone who does. Might be cool, despite being quite a sad song.
nonetheless, i find it quite hard to write things like this, but might be inspired to try my hand at it sometime.

Impressive stuff. I'd like to check out a few more of these songs of yours.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! I'll definitely try putting it to music :)

[Mitali Shah]

Painful yet awesome song reminding of many memories in every stanza. God bless

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much!

[ANTO]

I can definitely hear this one in my head CG. The No Girl refrain is an aural worm. You have a good head for hooks, I feel. The last 3 stanza/verses I can hear being spoken word/rap over the main song hook.
In my opinion its the best song on here (including my own).
You ARE Cool, Girl.
:))

[Cool Girl]

Lol, ANTO, that just made my day! I'm so glad that you enjoyed my song! You're always so kind, and I really appreciate that! Thank you so much! :)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome song Cool Girl :) I love that it is written with passion and you poured your heart into it :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much!!

[kronner'slove]

um this is such a sad song! ugh it's heartbreaking and yet it's a good song. i love this a lot. keep writing and oh, review my stories too plz?

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much and I will! I currently have over 400 read requests though..lol

[Lizardo]

Written in the perspective of a boy who lost his girl. Simply brilliant.
This is a good poem, although sad... but yet good. I like what you wrote here CG.
good poem.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, Lizardo! You're awesome :)

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!