Through My Eyes

Through My Eyes

A Poem by Cre8tiveheart
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Written for a man that was having difficulty accepting the fact he was no longer a 30 something guy!

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Through my Eyes

 

When you look into the mirror, do you recognize the man I see?

The one with great potential, to be whatever he wants to be.

 

Can you see the same compassion that I found there in your eyes?

There’s vulnerability below the surface, before you mask it in a disguise.

 

Did you know that the same hands you use to shave your face?

Are the same ones that I dream about, holding me in a warm embrace?

 

If you are really looking closely, you might notice some gray hair.

And the broad chest I lay my head upon, is wonderful when it is bare.

 

I wish I had the power to help you understand.

Even as your reflection changes, I fall more in love with this man!

© 2008 Cre8tiveheart


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Terrific job! I was surprised it wasn't longer! But really terrific job...full of love, and love is always a good thing...

Posted 16 Years Ago


Awesome Tribute to True Love.....Beautifully Written....Very expressive.....

Great Write~

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 24, 2008
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Cre8tiveheart
Cre8tiveheart

Oklahoma City, OK



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