The World of Unknown

The World of Unknown

A Poem by AdvisorGirl
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I was listening to music but something was wanting to be typed so I typed and go this.

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Do you hear it? A gentle wind guiding the soft relaxing ocean.

Following the tune and it leads you to a world of unknown.

But the worlds of unknown looks like your world.

Close your eyes, breath a slow breath in and out.

Open your eyes and the world you know has changed.

 

It’s the word you’ve imagined.

The fields of grain and the bright blue skies with a few fluffy clouds.

There’s no tall buildings or lots of them.

There’s only a small cottage on a hill with smoke rising from the chimney.

A smile is shown as you run towards the cottage.

 

Once you’re close you see that the cottage is almost a small house.

The perfect size that you always wished.

The bright colors that make it look like an ocean was drawn upon it.

Four small windows and a door that opens into the cottage of unknown.

Walking slowly to the door slowly with anticipation and excitement.

 

Grabbing the doorknob you open to find a perfect setting of the house.

A small breath lets out and a tear rolls down your cheek.

The setting inside the house was like the one you thought of as a child.

Falling to your knees you look with shock and a heart full of joy.

It doesn’t matter who else likes it you’re full of happiness in the land of unknown.

 

 

Looking around with amazement and joy you walk into the living room.

The living is like a beach with soft furniture of a couch and a chair.

A beach towel on a small end table with a vase of your favorite flowers: roses.

Smelling their sweet tingling fragrance sending a shiver down your body.

Smiling and walks towards the bedroom wondering what is there.

 

Beads hang from the doorframe and pushing them aside reveals a room like no other.

The room was like walking into the sky itself with the bed being a fluffy cloud.

A gasp escapes your lips as you lie on the bed feeling the softness beneath you.

Giggling you close your eyes taking a breath of calmness you start to relax.

A different sound is heard but it’s not the ocean.

 

You open your eyes to find you are in your bed of rough and hard.

The sound of traffic is heard even though the window is closed.

Looking around you realize that you are back in the world you do know.

A sad tear rolls down your cheek and hugs yourself wishing with all your might.

That you were back in your world of unknown that relaxed you.

 

With a sniff and a sigh you wish you were back in the world of unknown.

The world of unknown was nothing more than a dream.

Dreams that you’ve always wish to make true.

© 2010 AdvisorGirl


Author's Note

AdvisorGirl
Right what you wish I'm not afraid.

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Dreams, they are important to us all, they keep us going and bring up our spirits. This place sounds beautiful, I too imagine a place like this.
~Aradie

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I'm a mysterious person and if you send me something it may take a bit to get back at you. I'm honest and I rarely get into fights. I love writing. My writing is a bit strange it's like a poem but in .. more..

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