Until you left

Until you left

A Poem by Scott W. Martin
"

an expanded version of something I posted on facebook recently

"
When I was with you, I was alone

but didn't realize it


until you left of course


then the dreams and

I realized that it was natural

and all a lie


it wasn't you I missed

it was the imagined comfort

that you gave me


until you left of course


I had a dream
where I ignored you

not sure what to think


I've asked my self

if I still love you

and I thought we'd be forever


until you left of course

© 2012 Scott W. Martin


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Short and good. I really did enjoy. Good to see some more work from you man.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I loved it... until it ended of course. No, I still love. Very well written and I love the way you repeated 'until you left of course'. Good luck in the contest! I'll be uploading my submission soon :P

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2012
Last Updated on May 15, 2012
Tags: break up, love, disconnect, dream, left

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Scott W. Martin
Scott W. Martin

Charlotte, NC



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