I Promise

I wrote this for my mom. Please Comment! :)

I Promise,

To be there for you whenever you need help.

I Promise,

To be there for you when things are hard.

I Promise,

To be a better daughter.

I Promise,

To love you the rest of my days.

I Promise,

To have many laughs and happy days with you.

I Promise,

To be a better daughter.

I Promise,

That even if times be good or bad,

I will always be there for you.

Author's Note

Please Comment! :)

Reviews

[Mehul Rwat]

I feel that this poem actually takes the form of a true promise that you make to your mother. It strengthens the dimensions of the unconditional love you have for her and this is all very nice. As for the poem, it was simple but it conveyed some of the most complicated emotions.. So thumb's up for your work. Keep going.

[MrKnowAll]

A simple poem that shows the amount of love you have towards your mom and that is obviously a wonderful thing. The fact that you put your emotions and acts on as a poem confirm the deep bound you have with her.

Thanks for sharing!