Like a Storm

Yet another old and forgotten poem that I thought was okay. Please Comment! =)

My tears are fallin',

Like a raindrop to the ground.

My emotions rollin',

Like a storm that's comin' round.

I never knew that you could be so cruel.

Author's Note

I kind of feel like this is incomplete so if anyone wants to complete it please comment and do so! =)

Reviews

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gah! who's cruel? to create storm like that! *whistles* wow and the result of that was aexpressive poem...WICKED JOB!!! :)

[Mehul Rwat]

I did not knew that so short a poem can express so much. I'm amazed. =)

[Violeta]

I kinda feel the same... Maybe your last line add in how it relates to the storm again? Really drive your point home! :)

[Rose of Gondor]

'I didn't know that you could
Do this to me
To leave me alone
In the fallin' rain
In the crashin' lightening
In the storm

I never knew that you could be so cruel

Like a storm'

How's that? Sorry if it feels like I'm intruding in on your artistry, since I'm not much of a poet and all that :P. Anyways, awesome job. You should continue it yourself. :) Emphasis on yourself.