Reach Out Your Hand to Me

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The spinning never seems to stop,

Until your hand reaches out to me,

And then everything becomes clear,

I take your hand.

The Past,

The Future,

All Aligned,

Fate is falling prey to me,

I take your hand.

My eyes change,

I change,

A new me is born,

One that exists in the past and the future,

Exists in fate,

I take your hand.

And I land,

Now and forever in the present.

But now that your gone,

I am stuck,

In the present.

Only seeing visions of,

The Past,

The Present,

The Future.

I am Fate's prey,

Your hand falls.

Your eyes dull,

Your skin is cold,

A single tear falls down my face.

I am stuck.

In the Past,

In The Present,

In the Future.

Only seeing visions, 

Falling prey to fate.

I cry out as, 

Your hand falls.

My eternal pain,

Following me through Time.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Haley C]

I really like one, it's beautifully written!

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Good luck, in the contest! This poem is fantabulous!

[Mehul Rwat]

One word : Fantastic. I liked the flow of your words.

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Gah! Awesome!

[Rose of Gondor]

Beautifully written. Some how, every single one of your poems has that feeling of perfect flow. I was reading this aloud, and the sound glided through the air beautifully. The subject of this piece is sort of...haunting...I guess, not in the dark way, in the mythical 'wonderland I can't escape from' kind. Hauntingly beautiful. GREAT JOB!!! :) And thanks for reviewing my chapter! It meant a lot and now I have encouragement to keep going! :)