Turn Something Small Into Something Big

I wrote this when I was really tired so I was basically on a sugar high at that time. Please Comment! =)

A River flowed over a Mountain. 

The Mountain became a Hill.

A River flowed over a Hill.

The Hill became a Boulder.

A River flowed over the Boulder.

The Boulder became a Rock.

The River flowed over the Rock.

And the Rock became a stone.

The Stone turned into a Pebble.

The Pebble a grain of Sand. 

And the Sand a dust so pure.

That an Angel cried a New Tear.

That Tear became the Sea,

And the River combined with it to make the Ocean.

And the pressure of the water on the Dust.

Made the Dust a Mountain.

So begins our story anew.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mehul Rwat]

Hey! What a nice idea. You seem to have caught it well and expressed it well. Keep writing, my friend!

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That was great! It was cool to see the biggest things become a mere grain! awesome!

[x-aki-x]

This is something absofreakinglutely amazing! I loved the flow and the uniqueness of this poem.

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this write, thought it was put together well.