The Stalking Cat

I wrote this poem in sixth grade, the ending is a little revised. Hope you like it and please comment! =)

I'm swift and agile,

Smart and slick,

I can hid in the Shadows,

And be quicker than quick.

I can move my tail in Gracefulness,

And swerve my ears in many angles.

I like my swiftness,

And flexibility.

I can dispatch my prey,

With a pounce,

And a flick of my paw.

So listen here,

I may be right behind you,

Or in this very room,

I hide in the shadows,

Until I sneak, 

Up from behind,

Than I...

POUNCE!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Hahahahahaha. Love the last "POUNCE!" That part made me jump. So cute and so catlike. I like how you wrote in the cat's point of view. :) GREAT JOB!!!

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hahaha you just explained my one year old niece lol! no but my cats are like that too, i love it, it explains how a cat behaves.

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This is so wonderful and light, like this alot.....xo

[Mehul Rwat]

Good poem -- different style. You know one great poet also liked cats very much and he wrote about it too. Guess who. Send a message. Keep writing.