Summer Sun

This is another poem I wrote in sixth grade. Hope you enjoy and please comment! =)

I spin and spin! 

I love dancing in the summer sun!

It fills me with happiness and joy!

It makes me smile,

It makes me dance.

I spin and spin! 

I love dancing in the summer sun! 

It fills me with happiness and joy!

Author's Note

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Reviews

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This is short and sweet. It displays innocence and playfulness at such short length and the repetition of those three lines is effective in emphasizing this. The fact that you wrote it in the sixth grade makes it feel much more sincere. The simplicity of this poem is what I find most enjoyable.

[Rose of Gondor]

Awwwwwwww. Cute. :) This just made me smile so wide the insides of my cheeks hurt.

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Very nice! I like the winter darkness when i hibernate but I prefer the summer sun too. =P

[Mehul Rwat]

Cute and short.

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such a sweet wonderful write....xo