Cold Stone Road

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A shadow danced,

On the cold stone road,

That led to my future.

The sun wept,

Utop the road,

The road let out a shiver.

The first star gleams,

In the sky,

Doesn't give a whisper.

And why?

Oh, why?

Does this road have to be here?

~Lilywan Firelight, Maiden of The First Star

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[Emunah June.]

The sun wept,
Utop the road,
The road let out a shiver.

This line gave me such a vivid image that I was taken aback for a second. Just wow!! Seriously, wow!! I wish I had more to say, but I dont. It's just so...wow!

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hmmm makes me think about our future and how there will always be a path but with the sadness included inside.

[Violeta]

Very interesting, I loved the imagery! Good write :)

[Mehul Rwat]

I liked its make and structure. Enjoyed this...
Keep writing for good....