Trapped

Trapped in four walls,

As the blinding white falls.

Where dreamers dream,

The perfect scene.

 

A nightmare will appear.

You try to escape the fear

That draws very near.

For once was a dream

Could turn so mean.

 

The bright white returns.

The fears are gone.

For once what you knew

Disappeared in a yawn.

 

The white is almost gone,

As you watch from a far.

Trapped in four walls

What you knew will become a scar.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Hayley]

I like this a lot... normally i don't really like rhyming that much, but you really made it work. The ending is so true, how things that happen to you just become a scar but you still feel trapped, no matter how much you want to forget or move on, even when you think you have.
Nicely done!

[Autumn]

That was amazing! I love the flow of it and the meaning behind it.

[Poison Soulz]

Very good! I like the flow of the poem and just a really good poem =) nice work!