Why?

Why?

A Poem by Shiningwolf

Why won't you leave me alone?

Why won't you let me be?

Why can't you see

That I will always be just me.

 

So I'm not what you want

What does that mean?

Why do you haunt?

If you only knew the things I have seen.

 

I am so sick of you

All you do is yell

It really makes me blue

Because I won't be you.

 

Your image is not what I believe

I will not become your machine

So why do you make me grieve

I feel like I am being demeaned.

 

This world is not all laughs

This is honestly true

Because whenever I see you

It always makes me blue.

 

© 2011 Shiningwolf


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Relatable poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow :O
I love this poem
It's super powerful and it is very understandable (well to me anyways)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pretty sad but good
love the rhymes also

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very emotional, i almost feel like this person was trying to make you into someone your not.. it has a great flow to it... Take stand, take charge, dont let anyone push you around or change who you are! thanks for sharing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. I can relate to the feeling here, and the flow is pretty good, a little rough in some places, the third and fourth I think. But for the most part it's good :) Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it!!!!(the poem) the feeling of being controled sucks and i know exactly how you feel.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Shadow On My Shoulder
There is an angel who sits upon my shoulder who goes by the name of Death...
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Shiningwolf
Shiningwolf

Mustang, OK



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My name is Crystal. I am 23 years old. I am who I am. I am just a girl trying to traverse through the challenges of this life. I write to express myself and to create art that has meaning. more..

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