The Demons of Us All

I see a demon

No wait two!

Maybe three.

Why are they here?

And why are they making me blue?

 

Oh how I hate them so

They get me into trouble

They don't even care

As long as they keep me in a bubble.

 

Lying and cheating

And perhaps some hate

Why won't these feelings go?

They won't let me date.

 

This is extremely sad

To no extent

They try to creep into my brain

I always try to prevent.

 

This happens all the time

You know it's true

Now why don't it stop?

Because it makes people blue.

 

 

Reviews

[howlfjdks]

In this modern world, it is difficult to put yourself out there, not all know how to treat a heart.

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

WOW! this is good!

[cfix]

WOW!!! This is amazing! I like this write alot. very nicely done.

[BrokenLight]

wow!, very good poem. I can feel the sadness and kind of relate.

[Rose]

Interesting piece. An in depth look into a world all of the characters own..:)

[Frankie Nguyen]

Nicely done