Burning Passion!

This amazing sensation

It builds inside me

Watch it blow

And go out of control.

 

No one will know

What happens tonight

It will remain between us

If not, we will put up a fight

 

Your body is like art

Your kisses I adore

Watch the heat rise

As clothes fall on the floor.

 

Our bodies collide

Feeling the love tonight

It's out of this world

It's out of sight.

 

Your warmth is amazing

I hope mine is too

As we complete this untilmate vow

May this love stay true.

 

 

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

It is an amazing sensation, passion is like a gift for us to enjoy and one we never grow tired of. I really like the ending to this poem. "As we complete this ultimate vow" It can be or should be a joining of two soles and not just the flesh. A beautiful poem one with passion and love.

[Rose Masen]

So sweet, yet so full of blazing emotion. Nice job.

[Frankie Nguyen]

very nice