The Final Dream of Reality

Unlimited skies of opportunities

Crashing reality on young minds

With the experience of a master

Dreams of impossibility join the game

 

Purity of the soul full of light

Magical powers of wonderment

Kings and Queens of this world

The world of imperfection

 

Fighting with every swing of power

Prove the average man is unworthy

Peel back the black veil of disbelief

Achieve the prize of perfection

 

Kings and Queens of promise

Brothers and Sisters of hope

Break this barrier of despair

The master of mistakes

 

Shine your light to both sides

Two worlds coming together

Bringing about peace and harmony

Understanding each other’s pain.

 

Phoenix burning passion

Infused with the coldness to kill

Opposites collide forming magic

A ray of hope blasts all doubts

 

Knowledge forming in hearts

Take up arms to victory

Fight with the new found strength

End this ignorance of the human race.

Reviews

[ShaneBerry]

i think you would love the song "Kings and Queens" by a band called "30 Seconds to Mars" this poem greatly resembled the song. dreams are what push us humans forward. and if we do not destroy ourselves, dreams will be our continuation and sanctuary. great write my friend.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Excellent write, Shiningwolf. I love the imagery in this poem.. so many great lines I cannot possibly post them all here. We definitely need a spiritual awakening in this world before it is too late. Thanks for sharing!

[BlackMoonRising]

"The world of imperfection" My favorite part.

I love how you wrote this. Great job!

[Hayley]

I can see your writing is getting increasingly better. I like the way the stanzas all seem to come together, even though they are apart. I think that you could have rhymed in this one, however, but for a side note, it works without it!

[Lily Mae]

If only both could feel and see the light at the same time it would work... I swear some have spiritual blocks up against it.. I love this ...great write...xxx

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

It is like one giant game of chess, opposite sides sacrificing pawns in a game that leads to stalemate. Great poem.