Age of Man

The age of man is done

  The intelligence is shot with a gun

Watching happiness fade within

   No more smiles, not even simple grins

Darkness falls, there is no more sun.

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

Really enjoyed this piece! Well done

[Seshat Nidaba]

Prophetic, I like the tone.

[tekphobik]

And onto the downward spiral of humanity. I'm just waiting for the bottom to slide out.

[Lily Mae]

Short yet powerful..and so true.. Great write with well penned emotions...xx

[Kala Benfield]

i like this .! leaves the reader guessing.
keep it up (:

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

The age of man is put a drop in the ocean of existence.