I still love you

This is just a song I did for fun. Hope you like it and pls ignore grammar problems.

My heart is broken (don't you know)

I can darken it no more

I've seen the world

Whirled around it for so long.

My head keeps burning

And keeps on adding

I still love you...

My soul fell down 

Across the town

I can't take this no more (cause)

I could not ignore

But I still love you...

It's like a message you want to send

across the stars to a different world

I can stay no more (but I have to say)

That I still love you.

Author's Note

Tnx for reading, hope you liked it

Reviews

[Irvette Dauphine]

like it :)
keep writing...

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tnx

[Persephone]

You are quite talented at such young age - very relateable work here - keep writing :)

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Tnx!

[Corset]

It's wonderful! It would really make a great song also! My fav stanza "My soul fell down
Across the town
I can't take this no more (cause)
I could not ignore

But I still love you...

love that! well done!

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Thank u! That's my fav part aswell :)

[Audrey Howitt]

You express your heart so well, especially at your age! I am impressed!

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Tnx alot

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

This is quite impressive, and especially at your age! You have a fulfilling future ahead of you with that poetic mind and your ability to express what you feel so well.

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Tnx

[VelvetRosetta]

Wow I wish I had started writing at a young age, a very nice poem!

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Thank u

[Leslie Philibert]

A good write from a young talent !

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Thank u

[VelvetRosetta]

Your Welcome