Fame that I'll never get

Fame that I'll never get

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To get to broadway

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I feel a breeze 
That frees 
My soul
From the role
It has to play
To get to broadway
But I know it will never happen
Like there was never a dragon
I cry and scream
Till I can't dream
I only get nightmares
Which never compares
To the betray
To get to broadway

© 2012 .


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ignore grammar problems, pls review I would love to know what u think

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I reckon that you have a marked talent as a poet, this is great

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Thank u so much! ^.^ I'm really glad u liked it!
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Pax
your young and opportunities comes showering so dream big my friend....the power of positivism will shine ....you just have to believed that you can....
great write!!!
a 100 for you and positive outcomes will come...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Thanks, really I'm flattered and encouraged :)
Dreams can be true if we try good enough :) But I believe that thinking positive can help you go through the difficulties :) keep believing in yourself :D
Everyone do have a dream to fulfill and we shall all work hard!
Nice written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thanks! You've really encouraged me! :D
Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

ur welcome :)
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That is so cool I like it 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Tnx I'm glad u like it! :)
Ruby

8 Years Ago

:)
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AK
Wow! I love this poem! It has a nice tune and upbeat to it. Aeeosme wrote, keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Tnx! :)
AK

8 Years Ago

You're welcome!
i really like this :) sort of a "sell your soul to catch your heart" kind of thing. my favorite part is probably the first stanza, with the (highly appropriate) "Playing a role to get on broadway" metaphore. very nice :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Tnx =)
Awwh, I really like this but I hate the negativity! Never say that your dreams won't come true. There might be people that say you won't accomplish your goals/dreams in life but they're wrong. You have God to lean on and he's certain that you'll be successful in anything you do now or maybe down the road. Keep your head lifted high and don't get those scary nightmare filled with negative thoughts! Like my poem "Never Give Up", in the end I just do what I want to do even if people don't think I'm any good at it---WRITE! Great write, indeed Katerina. :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Tnx, I know I have to be more positive. Tnx again :D
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

8 Years Ago

You're welcome, and yes being positive will definitely make you feel better about yourself! :) You'r.. read more
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8 Years Ago

=)
good work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank u! :)
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AWW! I want to be on Broadway too! COME ON! Wee'll get there!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thanks, I'm very sure we all will, one day. :)
Very nice. Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank u! :D
Westminster Abbey

8 Years Ago

No prob! Don't give up!

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