what i'm talking about

this is what im talking about

the power i feel inside

the strangth that i now got

chorus

the power with in me

that i can't hide

i feel the stranth in me,

im un stopable

for my own good,

hook

im feeling better now,

better than i've ever felt before

i love this new feeling that i got,

inside mem

i feel couragiousm,

i feel happy,

loved and cared for.

i love this new feeling that i got

Reviews

[Spice]

imonly 16 but soon 17 and writing is my dream

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to read a loud your poetry. Can catch the simple mistakes. I like the energy and flow of life in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Spice]

ok i'm sorry

[selkietales]

Good job :) However you should check your spelling and consider capitalization.

[Spice]

thanks once again.:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, a short and telling piece, well done.