do you feeel the same

ont wanna lose you

looking deep into your eyes

i feel magic in side

in side of me

i don't wanna feel anything different

chorus

i don't want to lose this feeling that i now got with in me,

i hope you feel the same that i do

i hope you feel the harmony between you and me

i hope you love me as much as i love you,

i hope that you can look into my eyes and feel that magic in side

hook

i hope our love is as strong to you as it is to me

i hope you realize that I've fallen for you,

I've fallen deep in love with you

do you feel the same way bought me,

if not i undersatnd

Reviews

[Cree Nations]

Liked your words.

[Spice]

your apsalutly welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The questions of love keep us guessing and wondering. I like the flow of thoughts and the desire to know what is the truth. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Pencrafter]

I am married, just so you know. Anyway, it looks like the beginning of a nice love song. The one word line of 'hook' I don't understand. Also, the next-to-last line, did you perhaps mean 'about me'? I guess it could be a slang or shorthand version. Your poem expresses the basic human need for love and companionship that we all need. It's nicely written and the message is easy to understand. Good job.

[Rusty]

Would enjoy hearing the music

[Spice]

Why thanks

[selkietales]

Nice :) I like it, good job

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Ah, I know how this feels. You used wise words, and you really captured what's in the other person's mind. Very good and well done.