These tears

 

These tears I cry are from the heart

I should’ve known better from the start

For the mistakes that I have made…

Have been cast in stone and will never fade

Every time something feels familiar to you

I become a victim of your words – strong and brutal

And so I continue to walk on thin ice

Only to wrong you not once, but twice

But I’m only human it happened again

In my heart I know your distrust of me will never end

Sitting here not knowing what to do

I know it’s inevitable – you’ll cut me loose

To my surprise, you give me another chance

Another day for the verbal abuse to be enhanced

Your decision I know is from the heart

But you and the pain will never part

So I must say goodbye to you

For you will never trust me – no matter what I do

Reviews

[Charles D. Moorer]

If hindsight were present at all times, we would make no mistakes, we could not grow. If there were no betrayal, there could be no trust. How do we grow? How do we learn. What are the lessons? Betrayal is one!

[sheerpoetry]

These tears I cry are from the heart

I should've known better from the start

For the mistakes that I have made�

Have been cast in stone and will never fade

what a way to start. this is genuine and elegant

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very realistic and I'm consumed with wonder as to whether this was inspired by imagination or real events. I know that was a difficult decision for the subject to make considering her obvious love for this person. I can relate as I'm sure other reader can as well. This was a very vivid and touching piece! Great write......

[☮]

This is a very honest piece and a situation the best of us go through. Your poetry reveals a lot of inner pain. I can even imagine these as lyrics to a song. Nice work, as usual. Definitely keep posting.

[Lyrical Love]

The path I traveled while I read this piece not once, but twice
exhausted me with reality. Wonderful write!

[Fear Corrupts!]

Ah,
this is very well done, a very honest piece of poetry.
You conveyed your feelings very well in this.

Good Write,

[ Fear Corrupts! ]

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When we betray someone we love we often betray ourselves as well... and trust is hard to get back once broken, we must live and learn... well spoken write with sincere remorse, your words are ture words of a heart from a human being.