Losing

Losing

A Poem by D. Hansen

A chasm so deep,

No one could cross,

Shielding yourself,

From love,

And from loss,

Broken record,

Played all night,

Worn through,

With rips and tears,

Tossed away,

Like a waste of,

Space.

© 2014 D. Hansen


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Loads of feeling in just a few words. Having recently lost my husband, I can relate to this one. valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago
I have not been able to loose myself in an imaginary land for a very long time, but that is probably because I have work to do, or else I confuse the imaginary with the real in some subliminal way. I can loose myself in the music somethings though and in study

Posted 9 Years Ago

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 Added on October 21, 2014
Last Updated on October 21, 2014
Tags: Drifting, losing, lost, fragmented

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D. Hansen
D. Hansen

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I am an aspiring author, with several pieces already published. My favorite past-time is reading, because when you lose yourself in an imaginary land it feels as if you never have to return to the rea.. more..


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