Lay me down,by your side

I want to,

lay down by your side;

feel the warmth,

from your heart.

Feel your love,feel your pain,

as it flows,

from your soul,

in to mine.

I 

want to,

lay down,

by your side.

Hold you close,

your body next to mine,

feel your love,

till i die...

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Aww, this really made me cry. Ron, you really reach out and touch people with your poetry. Thank you for this one. For showing us all you care about others. You have a wonderful open heart and soul. blessings Dawn

[wordman]

thank you for the sweet review my friend,when you cry it cleans your soul

[Onlyme]

Ron like i said. Thank you for being you. A great friend to me. hug Dawn

[Lori Brown Boniciolli]

A short sweet love story. I like the repetition of the line "I want to lay down by your side." Very nice!

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by

[Lori Brown Boniciolli]

Very welcome!

[wordman]

looks like u got it

[DIVYA]

Feel your love,feel your pain,
as it flows,
from your soul,
in to mine.

My favorite lines...conveying the love comes so naturally and easily to you...

[wordman]

thank you very much

[DIVYA]

You are welcome

[Beautiful Intentions]

This is breathtaking in it's brief simplicity... Made me think of the song, "Lay Me Down" by Sam Smith. Sometimes we need only just a few words to leave such an impact as this sweet piece had done. It's just so sincere. And so selfless. Asking of nothing but only to hold the one near and dear to a heart, to know of their love until death should have you... Just sigh... Such romance in the little things. Love your song choice as well for this. Suits it so well. Was just a joy to read, wordman.

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit,and thank you for the beautiful review

[Beautiful Intentions]

So welcome!:)

[Gerry Legister]

I like Willie Nelson, his music is laid back especially when driving long distance , i could ,listen to his songs all day, nice tribute

[wordman]

thank you,and he is just laid back and down to earth

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Anyway Ron this is a romantic write one for lovers to share.

[wordman]

thank`s john,,missed this one

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful poetry for love. The song is very good also. Gentle words led reader to the good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thank you for reading john,always appreciated

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ron the post below is KT Little. Block him!

[wordman]

i figured it was,you`re on my friends list and this one is not,he`s not as smart as he thinks

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I may be getting overly cautious but I now always check the url for all friends requests. His latest is angeleapaugh

[wordman]

he wants to be just like us john !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

But he will never be like us Ron as his joy is destruction.

[wordman]

he will do anything,say anything to get us off w/c
it is killing him because we`re still here,he can run rampit and attack every body,if we were gone,he hates us because we stand up to him,he attacks people using my photo and a fake name,and most of them believe it`s really me,he got one woman to tell every body on w/c that i was a poetry thief...

[Einstein Noodle]

blissful read for me...we really can survive the fiery storms of youth and hormones that rage ...and this is the substance we really need and desire ..well said wordman! yes indeed!
E.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit my friend