When I

Love is the most amazing feeling.

 

When I think about you,

Everything around me disappears,

And your face is all I see.

 

When I talk about you,

My tongue ties itself in knots,

And the words won’t come out.

 

When you lie next to me,

I can feel each breath you breathe,

And it takes mine away.

 

When I lay my head on your chest,

I can hear your heart beating for me,

And it makes mine stop for just a moment.

 

When I hear you say my name,

It sounds so sweet on your lips,

And I can’t help but fall in love all over again.

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This is sweet. I love the tone. It is full of emotion. The flow works and the structure is perfect. Great work!