His

Coiled breaths bear upon blank spaces

Held captive by fleeting warmth

I am gaping

Wounded howls split the silence

Carried through shadows of loss

I am intact

Aching hands trace supple maps

Pressed firmly against main arteries

I am patient

Abashed cheeks hover above oblivion

Shifting quickly to present expression

I am tense 

Misshapen teeth hint the difference

Between gnashing and nipping 

I am willing

Deafening whispers filled with echoes

Weigh more heavenly at dusk

I am bemused

Solace wrapped words grope hesitation

Purging shrouded doubt within slick limbs

I am kindled

I am

Reviews

[AJNJ]

Your word choice is beautiful and you have some great, creative phrases here. Very well written.

[Sarah Jane]

Thank you so much.

[Franky]

Very nice creativity. This piece flowed nicely.

[Sarah Jane]

Thank you for you review, it is appreciated.

[Leo]

"Wounded howls split the silence
Carried through shadows of loss"

What a brilliant and creative line. I liked the style of your poem as well. Blessings

[Sarah Jane]

Thank you! I have been playing with different styles and flows, trying to see what I work best with.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Amaaaazzzing just loved this can’t wait to discover more of your writing ✍️

[Sarah Jane]

Thank you! I hope you continue to fond good things.

[PenManShep]

I like this poem. It is full of passion and desire. I also like the rhythm of it.